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One rose

singled out
among the bouquette
too many to count
but one is enough to play
with my heart
you deceiving twit
swept away with just that part
i wish you would've just quit

One rose

that's all it took
for me to fall
fall too fast to look
and see your true call
you only wanted one thing
and i wont give it up
preciously i cling
in my hands i keep cupped

One rose

sayed so much
but none of it truth
i should have seen the pain and such
but i still didn't want to see it after i punched out that first tooth
even cripple and curled up fetal
you still wanted what i wouldn't give
stabbed in my heart like a needle
twisting deeper and harder but yet i still live

One rose

is all i place atop the head stone
forgivness has yet to come
but all those girl's lives sewn
into your screwed up sum
brought me there
for my parting gift
i'm sorry, but at least im here
through my sins i sift
casting away these unwanted feelings
of regret, for you deserved it
but still a life is a life
and so i lay upon your grave
a farewell token
of your disgrace
a gift suited for only you,

one rose.
:iconkerowynbabe2964:

Author's Comments

in one of those moods where you feel like you need to forgive people for things they did a long time ago that you havn't let go of. this is just a way creepier way of sharing it.

-enjoy

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:iconvoltairedavinci:
Great use of the format i used in "Drip Drip". I am by no means saying that you copied me, this poem is kick ass!
:iconkerowynbabe2964:
haha thanks. i didnt even realize that it did that! it just sounded good. i was looking at my fake rose bunch and the paintings of roses in my room thinking that the single rose paintigns were prettier then the bunch. so One Rose became a poem

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~RAWR MY NAME IS JRISS~
:iconcold-hearted-fate:
A beautiful poem, with an effective use of repetition. Woot!
:iconkerowynbabe2964:
thank you

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~RAWR MY NAME IS JRISS~

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